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Untitled
The pain that exists; in the empty chamber that is your heart. As the days turn to dusk and dusk turns to dawn, and as the countless years that pass ...
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Abusive Teen Relationships
I’m in a club called S.A.D.D (Students against destructive decisions) and my adviser asked me to write an article, about abusive teen relationships. Just hoping I could get some feedback ...
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The Secret
I just recently started writing this story, and decided to post what I have so far, hoping to get some feedback to improve it. Enjoy THE SECRET As I sat ...
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English II Pre-Ap Essay
A Biography on George Eastman George Eastman was a great inventor. He is known as the “Father of Popular Photography,” bringing photography to the mainstream. If not for him, we ...
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Dr. Gamble
(I would love some feedback...good or bad)All I ever wanted became everything I fearAll I need, and everything dear,It's far away, six feet deep. Loving you was my farthest leap.And ...
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Momentary
(Not sure if I was right to put this under Dramatic Poetry...just had to get this rant out of my head)Feedback always welcome.It's a myth that cat's have nine lives,But ...
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Dumb it Down??
"Ayo dumb it down."You have heard this or atleast experienced this phrase in other words. This phrase that hints at the idea that I need to express myself to your ...
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Stuck Again
It’s like looking into a fogged mirrorAnd I know she’s thereShe’s in there somewhereI can find her, I can tryI can see straight up to the skyBut she wouldn’t go ...
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Letters to the ones I love
Dear Soul-thief, You try to be what you're not And you've never gotten caught It makes me sick to see How strung out you came to be Dear Kryptonite, The ...
